I take it the concept being you didnt think, rather you felt? At least thats the way it felt to me, as though you were discovering it as you built it, you let it come to you, and truthfully I think it worked well here. Good stuff.
I take it the concept being you didnt think, rather you felt? At least thats the way it felt to me, as though you were discovering it as you built it, you let it come to you, and truthfully I think it worked well here. Good stuff.
Honestly, that is how most of my music comes out. This was made in just over an hour. Most of my music comes to me in the shortest time possible.
Oooh! Love that buildup!
Seriously my friend, I love that slow start and the gradual buildup to the fast paced beat. Masterfully done my friend, well done!
Thanks!
I actually like the lyrics
I think if you actually add a chorus at some point it could work too. Though I do also like the idea of it being the slow intro, and the buildup to the more fast paced beats. This has some fantastic pacing by the way. I eagerly look forward to the finished product =D
Hey thanks a lot!!! I actually have the flp. up right now listening to it to try to write some lyrics. I hope to have this done shortly!!! Thanks again
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A hero taking a long deserved rest.
Thats what I feel when I listen to this, a hero who has been through a lot taking a rest and finally looking back at all that has happened, building the resolve he needs to go the rest of the way. I feel like it has some Cowboy Bebop and Big O influences here, though that may just be me placing them there. I really enjoyed this piece and you should be proud. Well done my friend. Keep up the good work. =D
Thanx for the review, I'm glad that you like my music.
Actually the story of this song is a bit different, a bit more sad.
not bad
To be honest this isnt bad, and I can kind of feel the vibe that you're trying to portray here. The problem lies in that the vibe, the feel of love and death is almost covered with the soft sound of the song. I think it needs to have some more emphasis of some of the higher notes, having them sort of splash forth in dramatic high points in the song. Almost as though you can feel the burst of emotion, the tears falling. I hope to see more from you in the future =D
and so you will! :D With the softness of the song your right, i mastered it a little bit too much, but since I came out on the top 30, ill put out a little surprise to celebrate! :) I know what you exactly what you mean dude! Keep an eye out for the better and more open version of this one! :) Thanks for the constructive review, and the 8!
Dj Roc A Lot / War At Heart / The Boombox Saint
Age 37, Female
California
Joined on 8/21/04